in the grey mist,
i saw you standing with your head bent
pondering a single spot of destined illumination–
i almost called out to you in recognition
and then realized how silly that would be
since i was so very far away
in the grey mist,
i saw you standing with your head bent
pondering a single spot of destined illumination–
i almost called out to you in recognition
and then realized how silly that would be
since i was so very far away
oh your words get me every time….. thanks sylvia!
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Thank you Jodi 🙂
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Lovely
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Thanks so much Sherry.
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Amazing
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Thank you.
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now he looks so lonely, after reading your peom
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Yes, they always look that way to me.
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A mysterious mood and the image lingers in my mind. Makes me wonder
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Yes, me too….makes me wonder.
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Fantastic poetry!
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Thank you for being so encouraging!
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🙂 Love this. At the least, it does not question its purpose.
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Very true.
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Poignant…love the distancing…
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Thanks so much.
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Cool poem and photo.
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Thank you very much.
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