gowalkingtunnelsstreetspeoplecolors
signssmellscarslightshornsbuildings
voicesarrowsnumbersmetalbricks
glassfoodlanguagespigeonsdrinking
smokingtrashcandybroomstrains
shoppingneonelmocamarasanxiety
exhaustexhaustionrevolvingdoors
coatsmusicrunninghatsclocksalleys
truckssewerssteamcloudscursingcold
hotsmilingeatingarcadesshopsoffices
computerswindowspolicechildren
strollerssupermanstrawscirclesmoney
lettersvertigofastforwardrewindstop
Fun poem 🙂
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Thank you.
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It’s crowded alright! Superb and excellent poem!!! 🙂
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Thank you! This is how I feel when I’m in NYC.
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great stuff!!! 🙂 Such a fun read.
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Thanks Jodi. I really did see Elmo in Times Square 🙂
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got my attention, like puzzle. Nice
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Thank you.
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I’ve been to NY several times and your poem describes it all.
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Frenetic with lots of energy and anxiety and excitement…..how it strikes me every time.
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“Fast forward, rewind, stop.” Doesn’t get much more stream of conscious. 🙂 –Curt
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Absolutely right.
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If you read the poem out loud and fast enough, you can hear the train going below the street (Subway)! Thanks S. Clever! 🙂
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Yes!
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I love this! It perfectly captures how I feel each time I step out onto the street in NYC. I like that “smells” made it up so high in the poem 🙂 The city certainly has a lot for each of our senses to absorb.
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It certainly does!
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